Есе по английски.Shery спаси ме

Обикновенно потребителката шери си орави труда да пише есета особено по англисйки.Моля те за помощ спаси ми гъзъ :cry: ще съм ти много благодарен.

Имам 5 есета и крайния срок е понеделник :cry:
Сега не ме нападайте да почна да ги пиша защото английския ми е труден :cry:

1 What makes a good film great?
2 It is a good thing that we cannot predict the future accurately
3 Great films help us discover our personal values
4 Few wishes come true by themselves
5 The media does not give a clear and accurate picture of events.We see through the eyes of reporters who are prejudiced and whose views are biased
разбира се или трябва да се съгласищ или да оспориш :cry:

[pinK_Baby]

До колко думи трябва да са? Мисля, че мога да ти напиша есе по първата тема...А може и по някоя друга да погледна , обаче устройва ли те да е довечера понеже сега съм на училище? По всичките 5 ли трябва да пишеш или да си избереш една от тях?...Разясни ми и ще ти напиша едно или две или колкото мога :)

Трябва всички защото са за оформяне на успеха :cry:
Ще съм ти АДСКИ благодарен ако ми помогнеш ако ще да го напишеш и в неделя {}

[pinK_Baby]

Трябва всички защото са за оформяне на успеха :cry:
Ще съм ти АДСКИ благодарен ако ми помогнеш ако ще да го напишеш и в неделя {}

Ще се опитам да ти помогна максимално...Ама колко трябва да са дълги не ми каза :(

300-350 words :cry:
Всъщност колкото и да напишеш пак ще ме спасиш,затова ти блаодаря {} {} :)

[sherryto]

Neznam dali 6te moga da napi6a vsi4kite,nqmam mn svobodno vreme.
Pink girl,ti koe moje6 da napi6e6,az mislq,4e izbiram 3 i 5

[sherry]

http://www.teenproblem.net/school/index.php?m=s&id=740
:wink:

[pinK_Baby]

Sherry аз съм по първото и айде ще се пробвам и за четвъртото...Даже за първото съм измислила вече подтезите ей сега сядам да го напиша цялото... Другото после :)

[sherry]

do nedelq 6te ti napi6a i 3toto :wink: [/b]

shery много ти благодаря много е хубаво!:)))))))
Ако можете да помогнете и с другите.. :P

[pinK_Baby]

Ето моето есе....Sherry ще те помоля да го провериш и където има грешки да ги поправиш :) Малко е бозаво ама дано ти свърши работа...

What Makes The Good Film Great?

Let's think.How many movies are there in the whole world?It's hard to count them, isn't it?But there are may be only 200 of all that could be called "great". You remember their titles forever and they stay forever in your mind. Because some movies are eternal and there is no matter how old they are.
I think I know the formula for that how to make one film not only good but great.It's a combination of good team of producers,directors,actors, interesting script and some surprise,something unpredictable,something new that will impress people.Only then it boasts to call one movie classic.
What do people like in movies?It's a fact that when the film is based on a true story ot real case ,it has got success.Let's take for example "Titanik" - one of the biggest tragedies in the world's history.Thousands of people are dead and in the deep waters of the Pacific Ocean forever will lay the remains of this glorious ship.And to make the action more interesting producers bring forward us one moving love story at the background of the big tragedy.This is what exactly gives us the right to call "Titanik" everlasting movie.
Another important part for the success of the film are the actors.If one actor is good and talented he could show us the essence of his hero in the most comprehensive and precise way.The actor could make people laugh with his hero,to cry with him,to have sympathy to him.This is the exactly role of the actors - to give life of their hero and to play their part with sense.
And finaly, the top of the desert is the moment with the surprise - when you understand that nothing is what it seems to be and that everything in your life is unpredictable.For example for thrillers is important to keep the public nervous untill the end of the movie,for horrors the fear is at first place,the funny situations and words make the comedy interesting.Every style of movie has his requirements to become great.
It definitely boasts to call the cinema "the eight wonder of the world" because every great film gives us a little example how to be better,funnier,happier,more brave,more beautiful,more inteligent people in this dynamic world.And now when I stopped writing I think to go to the cinema,to buy some popcorn and chips and to watch some really good movie.

Такам...Това е...I hope it will help you :)

Адски много ти благодаря,да си жива и здрава: ))))))))

[sherry]

Pinky ,haresva mi!Navqrno i dvete s tebe imame mn gre6ki v sa4ineniqta si,no nqma zna4enie,6te mu pogmonem vse pak.
Sega se setih za edna gre6ka,mai ne e"no matter how old are they",a "there is no matter how old they are" :wink:

[sherry-nelognata]

Sega 6te mi vzimat kompa.6te mi preinstalirat windowsa,zatova dnes nqma da moga da ti napi6a eseto,koeto ostana.Dano do utre mi go varnat,za da uspeq da ti pomogna :wink:

[teenkopele]

Sega se setih za edna gre6ka,mai ne e"... how old are they",a "there is no matter how old they are" :wink: [/b]

2то е вярно. :)

1то е правилно да се използва ако се задава въпрос. :wink:

[-GuesT-]

Браво за положения труд !

Не се сърдете само да вметна няколко грешки, които забелязах ( всички без една са правописни :D )
Титаник не е потънал в Тихия океан, а в Атлантическия ( The Atlantic Ocean)
desert - пустиня ; dessert - десерт
Titanic
intelligent
until

No offence, съчинението е супер :)

[pinK_Baby]

Мерси много за поправките :) Оценявам го....Есето не е най-доброто ,което съм писала признавам си...Но по ме бива да пиша за чувства и отношения...Тая тема ми е малко суха :roll: :wink: :)

[e_l_i_z_a]

И аз мога да помогна обаче ми трябва написано на БГ. :wink:

[sherry]

http://www.teenproblem.net/school/index.php?m=s&id=743
Eto i drugata tema

[sherry]

http://www.teenproblem.net/school/index.php?m=s&id=745

[pinK_Baby]

Few Wishes Come True By Themselves

All their life people want something - friends,better job,new computer, love , health , save life,new car.Our wishes are without number and some of them are very difficult to execute.Some things don't depend on us , but for another ones you should work hard to deserve them.
If you want something very strongly you thanks God when it happens , but in fact you have done it by yourself on one or another way.You want hard to take your exams and to go to the dream school and it happens.This is a result of your hard work and the knowledge and the skills you have learned threw the years.
Let's imagine you like some girl.She is amazing,very beautiful and communicative and you give everything to be her boyfriend.But this won't happen untill she even doesn't know that you exist.You will be nobody for her untill you won't go to her and tell her : "Hi.How are you?Nice to meet you." This is the first step for your wish to come true.If you stay at the corner waiting for her to notice you , you may wait all your life.But when things are in your hands you have chance to succeed.
What would you do if you were a little more plump than the normal and this makes you upset?Girls don't like you and one great person is hidden in this body.Think- if you don't start to take cares of your body you won't never achieve to look like you want.But with constancy and efforts all your dreams could come true.
Every thing in this wourld have to be deserved in some way.Every day of your life is a try to get that you want and to develop like person and every effort makes you happier , more satisfied and wiser. After all your efforts you can say you have done something important in your life.

[sherry]

yeee,sega mom4eto ima vsi4ki temi,radvam se,4e uspqhme da mu pomognem =D> mersi za pomo6ta pink_baby :D

[pinK_Baby]

Браво Sherry , well done и на двете ... :) Дано вече не е късно :P Пък и беше добър повод за да си размърдам малко мозъка за английския...