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Да, супербаналното есе "За и против града" (For and against living in a town). Ако някой може да помогне, нека да го направи, защото в тийн учителя не намерих нищо, а не мога да си позволя лукса преди ваканцията и в края на срока да изкарам ниска оценка.
Sladkata_Nansi
12-19-2006, 09:52
Za koga ti triabva?Az minalata godina pisah takova ese i ako go nameria kade e moga da ti go napi6a tuk,no sega niamam vreme.Pi6i za koga ti e i dove4era 6te ti go napi6a, ako go nameria ;)
Sladkata_Nansi
12-19-2006, 09:55
Mdaaa takmo go namerih!Ako ne e kasno dove4era 6ti go napi6a ;)
Mdaaa takmo go namerih!Ako ne e kasno dove4era 6ti go napi6a ;)
Ще се радвам, ако го направиш. :)
Sladkata_Nansi
12-19-2006, 18:45
Everything in life has advantages and disadvantages, as well as living in the sity.
On the plus side the sity is good place for development at the person.You can associate with many intelligent people.Nevertheless you can feel lonely sometimes,because everybody look at yourself.
Another point is that you can find the job very easyly in the city,what is more good paid.That in such a way,because there is a lot of firms,shops in the city.They need from labour power.
Other advantage is professional school and the university.
For example there isn`t university in town therefore these who finish off high school and they want to learn,they leave the town and go to continue their education in the city.In spite of there is such people,who have not money or wish for learning.
There is urban transport in the city,however it is often dirty or no good for travelling.Then the peopleare dissatisfied.
The best thing in the city may be is entertainment.It there is always interesting places,where you can have a good time.For instanse cinema,museum,concert,lunapark and so on.
Living in the city there is and disadvantages.
In the first place are crimes.You can`t walk on the street calmly without being of your life.In the city often commit murders,burglaries,rapes,frauds and so on.
Other disadvantages is dirty air.That is such a way from the big undertaking and factories.Furthermore you can endure of noise very difficulty.
In conclusion I can say that on the one hand living in the city is very good for possibility,but on the other hand you can`t live calmly.Because of that many people,who live in the city prefer pure and fresh air on the province even only in the rest day.
Eto tova e moeto ese,no ne garantiram,4e niama gramati4eski gre6ki ;) Proveri si go i za pravopisni i dano ti svar6i rabota! :)
crazy_mouse
12-19-2006, 19:01
Може и да има още грешки но сега нямам време
Everything in life has advantages and disadvantages, as well as living in the city.
On the plus side the city is good place for development at the person.You can associate with many intelligent people.Nevertheless you can feel lonely sometimes,because everybody look at yourself.
Another point is that you can find the job very easliy in the city,what is more good paid.That in such a way,because there is a lot of firms,shops in the city.They need from labour power.
Other advantage is professional school and the university.
For example there isn`t university in town therefore these who finish off high school and they want to learn,they leave the town and go to continue their education in the city. Although(не може след in spide of да следва обикновено изречение)there is such people,who have not money or wish for learning.
There is urban transport in the city,however it is often dirty or no good for travelling.Then the people are dissatisfied.
The best thing in the city may be is entertainment.It there is always interesting places,where you can have a good time.For instance cinema,museum,concert,lunapark and so on.
Living in the city there is and disadvantages.
In the first place are crimes.You can`t walk on the street calmly without being of your life.In the city often commit murders,burglaries,rapes,frauds and so on.
Other disadvantages is dirty air.That is such a way from the big undertaking and factories.Furthermore you can endure of noise very difficulty.
In conclusion I can say that on the one hand living in the city is very good for possibility,but on the other hand you can`t live calmly.Because of that many people,who live in the city prefer pure and fresh air on the province even only in the rest day.
Sladkata_Nansi,
много благодаря за есето. :D
crazy_mouse,
благодаря за адекватната коректорска намеса. :)
Sladkata_Nansi
12-20-2006, 07:56
Sladkata_Nansi,
много благодаря за есето. :D
crazy_mouse,
благодаря за адекватната коректорска намеса. :)
eiiiii tam kadeto go e popravil/a ne e "easliy",a easily!!! ;) i Niama za kakvo da mi blagodari6-dano izkara6 hubava ocenka!
crazy_mouse
12-20-2006, 09:30
Sladkata_Nansi,
много благодаря за есето. :D
crazy_mouse,
благодаря за адекватната коректорска намеса. :)
eiiiii tam kadeto go e popravil/a ne e "easliy",a easily!!! ;) i Niama za kakvo da mi blagodari6-dano izkara6 hubava ocenka!
А да.Еми от бързане така става :roll: :wink:
Sladkata_Nansi
12-20-2006, 18:02
Sladkata_Nansi,
много благодаря за есето. :D
crazy_mouse,
благодаря за адекватната коректорска намеса. :)
eiiiii tam kadeto go e popravil/a ne e "easliy",a easily!!! ;) i Niama za kakvo da mi blagodari6-dano izkara6 hubava ocenka!
А да.Еми от бързане така става :roll: :wink:
Ami i az ot barzane sam pisala sity vmesto city i easyly vmesto easily-4ak posle se smiah na gre6kite si :lol:
az edin pat na edno kontrolno po angliiski mnogo se bqh shashnal i mesto "I" sam pisal "Ai" ..golqm smqh e kak da e imah 6 :mrgreen:
Sa4inenieto na momi4eto e hubavo ama e full s gre6ki :) Imam predvid leksikalni i gramati4eski..
ProstoAz
12-21-2006, 12:21
Everything in life has advantages and disadvantages, as well as living in the city.
One the one hand, the city is a good place for development at the person. You can associate with many intelligent people. (какво въобще искаш да кажеш с това?) Nevertheless, you can feel lonely sometimes because everybody takes care about oneself.
Another point is that you can find a job very easliy in the city that would be better paid. That in such a way, because there is a lot of firms, shops in the city. (какво искаш да кажеш с това?) They need of labour power. (?)
Another advantage is a professional school and an university.
For example, there isn't an university in the towns so those who finish high school and want to learn leave the town and go to continue their education in the city. Although there is such people, who have not money or desire to learn.
There is urban transport in the city. However, it is often dirty or bad for travelling. Then the people are dissatisfied.
May be the best thing in the city is it's entertainment. There are always interesting places, where you can have a good time. For instance cinema, museum, concert, lunapark and so on.
On the other hand living in the city has also it's disadvantages.
First there are crimes. You can't walk on the street calmly (?) without being afraid (?) of loosing your life. In the city often commit murders, burglaries,rapes, frauds and so on. (какво искаш да кажеш с това?)
Another disadvantage is the dirty air. That is such a way from the big undertaking and factories. Furthermore you can endure of noise very difficulty. (какво искаш да кажеш с това?)
In conclusion, I can say that on the one hand living in the city is very good for possibility (?), but on the other hand you can't live calmly (?). Because of that, many people who live in the city prefer pure and fresh air on the province even only in the rest day.
Като изключим многото граматически грешки есето е добро!
И още нещо много важно - прескача се място след пунктуационните знаци!