Essay po ENGLISH

[asdasasas]

Molq,koito razbira da mi proveri eseto i da kaje dobre li e i kude ima gre6ki,ako ima-da gi popravi. pls,pls:
What makes surfing the Net great?
Nowadays,people use Internet for everything-to find an information,to download music and movies,to read the news,even to read books. We can also buy things on the Internet. Surfing the Net is useful,interesting and sometimes exciting. What makes it so is the way in which the information is represented-with pictures and different type. You can understand many things faster-when you want to know something,you just write the keyword in google and there will be many results. In the Net there are many sources of information,so you can choose which to read and use. You don't have to turn over the pages and wait,but you can get what you are interested in at the moment. For some people it's a job-for another-just a hobby-however,it's a place in which you can understand for a lot of details. You can surf in the Net just to relax,to fill your free time and meanwhile to enrich your knowledges.

Tova ee. Molq za sudeistvie. #-o [-o<

[thefreak]

What makes surfing the Net great?
Nowadays, people use Internet for everything - to find information, to download music and movies, to read the news, and even to read books. We can also buy things of the Internet. Surfing the Net is usefull, interesting and sometimes exciting. What makes it so, is the way information is presented - with pictures and [(different type)-това какво е?). You can understand things faster when you want to learn something. You just write the keyword in 'Google' and there you are, looking at loads of links to information you are searching for. In the Net there are many sources of information, so you can choose from which to read. There`s no need to turn over pages, searching endlessly for information, you can get what you want immediately. For some people - it's a job, for other - just a hobby, however it's a place where you can find a lot of details. You can surf in the Net just to relax, to fill your free time and meanwhile to enrich your knowledge.

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