Проблем с едно писмо по английски! СПЕШНО ЗА УТРЕ! ! !

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Здравейте.. Имам проблем с писането на едно писмо, което ми трябва спешно за утре рано сутринта.. Трябва да напиша писмо, в което да се оплаквам за условията на цирк, на която сме ходили с класа ми и който не е отговарял на условията вписани в рекламната брошура. Трябва да е не по - малко от 180 думи. Ето и сканирани страници от учебника , на който са дадени напътствия. АКо някой може да ми помогне и да ми напише писмо ше съм мн благодарна! Мерси предварително!!! Ще ми спасите кожата..

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to express my disappointment at a recent visit to the ‘Chipperhall Circus Extravaganza’ on Saturday 17th March.

To begin with, the location of the circus seemed to me extremely inappropriate, as it is well known that the area where the circus settled down is a muddy field and we obviously had our shoes ruined by the mud.What is more, when we finally managed to enter the circus we discovered that our seats were just behind a large pillar, which obstructed the view of the spectacle.

In addition, the spectacle was supposed to begin at 7.00 pm., in fact nothing really happened until 7.30pm which was particularly hard on my children, who had been looking forward to the event all day and finished just an hour later. Such a delay seems to me disrespectful to the audience.
Furthermore, the service inside the circus was totally inefficient because the few waiters serving were not able to fulfil the orders of all those who went to the bar during the interval, so that it was impossible to get a drink during the break.
Finally, the most serious of my complaints is that during the show, one of the lions got outside the ring, frightening the audience. This lack of security seems to me inexcusable.
I believe your spectacle should be reorganised afresh as it lacks of the most elementary safety standards and you should treat your audience better.
I hope you will take adequate measures to improve your show.

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