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ilovemyself
03-20-2008, 21:58
Много ви моля редактираите ми написаното есе на английски,знам че не е правилно,а ми триабва спишно за утрее!ПЛС помогнете


The people ask themselves who organizes the money really surely?The thousands-human"s lives have been being taken becaus of material.The thing on the world is not so catastrophic for us as (като)the money.The life is excessively short for us to lose him because of small one papers,the embrace is more nice from new,expensive present.We must not be gowns to the money ,and they of us !!!

Много ще съм Ви благодарна!!!!!!!!!