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tony_8989
08-26-2008, 12:12
I thought i would forget,
but now i miss you so much.
All i do is regret
that you are out of touch.

I can only guess
what do you think or feel.
I just can confess
that my sorrow is real.

I have tried so hard
to put off my affection.
But how to tell my heart
to take a new direction?

Why don't you let me know?
Why don't tell me what to do?
Just tell me yes or no
cause i can't release from you.

Whyniser
08-26-2008, 12:50
Не лошо.Може и по-добре

Barbie
08-26-2008, 14:35
Just tell me yes or no
cause i can't release from you.

Не ми се вижда граматически правилно. Трябва да е release myself from you.

ScionOfStorm
08-26-2008, 15:41
аха, рилийз в тоя случай задължително трябва да е с myself.

иначе - не е лошо, ама убер клиширано. :)

tony_8989
08-28-2008, 14:47
e, prav/a si, no nali znae6, 4e v poeziqta ne e zadyljitelno vsi4ko da e gramati4eski pravilno :)

Whyniser
08-28-2008, 16:26
e, prav/a si, no nali znae6, 4e v poeziqta ne e zadyljitelno vsi4ko da e gramati4eski pravilno :)
Важи само за нашия език.Другите Съкс :lol: