Домашно по английски език...

[SheMeTcHeTo]

Моля ви.. помогнете ми като ми преведете това правилно и да звучи добре на английски.. важно ми е това домашно.. :-# :cry: :oops:


Миналата вечер бях останала сама вкъщи, защото родителите ми бяха но гости при техни приятели. Попринцип много пъти съм оставала сама вкъщи и не ме е страх от тъмното и не вярвам в духове и таласъми. Но тази вечер се случи нещо странно и различно...

Както си гледах филм и си ядях пуканки в моята стая изведнъж чух странен шум от първия етаж на къщата. Уплаших се и светнах лампата в моята стая и в коридора. След това взех една то хилките ми за федърбал(бухалка), а в другата ми ръка държах телефона си, за да се обадя на родителите ми ако е нещо сериозно.

Дакато вървях бавно по коридора към стълбите усетих как леко се изпотих и страхът в мен ставаше все по-голям. Чух странния шум още няколко пъти и не знаех какво става и какво може да е това. Събрах смелост и слязох на палавината на стълбището и видях, че външната врата е отворена, но няваше никой и нищо.

Светнах лампата и отидох да затворя вратата. Вече бях малко по спокойна, но докато се качвах по стълбите вратата пак се отвори и виждах силна и ярка бяла светлина. Какво ли беше това? Може би презрак? .. Бях много изненадана и уплашена и веднага звъннах на родителите ми, които побързаха да се преберат, защото вече се бях разплакала и заключила в стаята си. Те се пребраха и казаха, че нищо не са видяли и чули и вратата си е била затворена. Просто сигурно съм си измислила или съм сънувала.

Благодаря ви много... :-)

[454SS]

Ти кво ще ми дадеш

[Boot]

като ти е много важно, хвани и си го напиши сама.
После можеш да го пуснеш тук и евентуално някой да ти го провери за грешки :)

[cherreshkata]

Last night I was left alone at home because my parents were but visitors in their friends. many times have I left at home alone and I'm not afraid of the dark and do not believe in ghosts and ghoul. But tonight something strange happened and the other ...

As I watched film and I was eating popcorn in my room suddenly heard a strange noise from the first floor. I was afraid and lit the lamp in my room and hallway. Then it took a hilkite my (bat), but in my other hand holding your phone to call my parents if something serious.

Dhaka walking slowly in the hallway stairs to how I felt slightly izpotih and the fear in me was growing. Weird noise heard several times and I did not know what is happening and what could be it. I gathered courage and came down to palavinata of stairs and saw that the door is open, but there was nobody and nothing.

Lit the lamp and went to close the door. I was already somewhat relaxed, but while going up the stairs the door opened again and I see a strong and bright white light. What was that? Maybe a ghost? .. I was very surprised and scared and immediately zvannah my parents who hasted to preberat because I was already tearful and locked in his room. Prebraha and they said that nothing is seen and heard and the door has been closed. I have probably just made up, or I am dreaming.

Може да има грешки. Провери си го !

[1n5ub0rd1na73]

Last night I was alone at home because my parents were visiting some friends of theirs. I’ve been left alone many times before. I’m not afraid of darkness, nor do I believe in ghosts or ghouls. But that night something different and strange happened…
As I was watching a movie and eating popcorn in my room, I heard a strange noise coming from the first floor of the house. I got scared, turned on the lamps in both my room and the corridor. Afterwards I took one of my badminton rackets in my hand while holding my cell phone in the other, to call my parents if it were something serious.
As I was advancing slowly along the corridor towards the stairs, I felt a slight perspiration and growing fear within me. I heard the peculiar noise a few more times and I neither knew what was going on, nor what was causing it. I mustered up courage passed halfway through the stairs when I saw the front door was ajar, but there was nothing beside it.
I switched on the lights and went to the door to close it. I was beginning to feel calmer, but as I was going up the staircase, the door flung open and I saw a blindingly bright light. What was that? Maybe a ghost? I was quite surprised and scared; I called my parents immediately, who hurried return because I was already crying in my locked room. They got home and said they’d seen nothing and the door had been closed. I must have been dreaming.

[SheMeTcHeTo]

Благодаря ви многооо! :-) :grin:

[LetTheMusicTalks]

Защо винаги трябва да го превеждате от бг а ае а не го пишете направо на ае не схванах и аз кво говора ам :D

[Myrth]

1n5ub0rd1na73, добър английски. Откога го учиш и къде? :)

[LetTheMusicTalks]

като ти е много важно, хвани и си го напиши сама.
После можеш да го пуснеш тук и евентуално някой да ти го провери за грешки :)
+1

[1n5ub0rd1na73]

Мерси, Myrth. Отдавна го уча вкъщи.