BarbieIf
01-03-2010, 10:58
Здравейте! .. Имах едно домашно да напиша страшна история и просто искам някой да я провери за грешки, защото съм сигурна, че има доста, а това разказче е доста важно.Благодаря ви предварително :) ..
It was Saturday evening.The start were shining, the wind was blowing and touching soflty my hair.My boyfriend and I have been together since one year and that day was our anniversary.We have been decided to go out and spent one night under the sky.I live in a small house near to a forest.It`s beautiful during the winter.
All day I have been prepearing for that night.It was a special night.I cooked some thing . I remember that I prepared his favourit dish Musaka.He loves Musaka.Anyway, he came to take me.It wat amazing.The sky was clear and I could see all stars , touzand of stars.We posted our blanket and sit down.He took my hand and said he loved me.I started crying of course.A few minutes later I heard something.It was like a baby crying.It was strange.We were in the forest and it was one o`clock.I asked my boyfriend if he heard something but he said he didn`t.Hour late I heard that cry again and I got scared.My boyfriend was kissing me when I sam behinf him a lady in white.There was a baby in her hands.She was with long black hair and her eyes were black too.I screamed.My boyfriend asked me what`s going on and I just put my finger on her.He saw her too.I hugged my boyfriend.My body was trebling.The woman in white whispered something.She asked me to take her baby.I didn`t want to do this and I refused.She became angry.She open her mouth and it was like a black hole.She started saying a prayer to the Satan and she put her baby on the ground.She just disappeared and I was wondering how.I looked at the baby.It was dead.Dead baby covered with blue blanket.I wanted to say something but I couldn`t.My boyfrined`s face was white.We were afraid.He took my hand and we went away with our hearts beating fast.
It was Saturday evening.The start were shining, the wind was blowing and touching soflty my hair.My boyfriend and I have been together since one year and that day was our anniversary.We have been decided to go out and spent one night under the sky.I live in a small house near to a forest.It`s beautiful during the winter.
All day I have been prepearing for that night.It was a special night.I cooked some thing . I remember that I prepared his favourit dish Musaka.He loves Musaka.Anyway, he came to take me.It wat amazing.The sky was clear and I could see all stars , touzand of stars.We posted our blanket and sit down.He took my hand and said he loved me.I started crying of course.A few minutes later I heard something.It was like a baby crying.It was strange.We were in the forest and it was one o`clock.I asked my boyfriend if he heard something but he said he didn`t.Hour late I heard that cry again and I got scared.My boyfriend was kissing me when I sam behinf him a lady in white.There was a baby in her hands.She was with long black hair and her eyes were black too.I screamed.My boyfriend asked me what`s going on and I just put my finger on her.He saw her too.I hugged my boyfriend.My body was trebling.The woman in white whispered something.She asked me to take her baby.I didn`t want to do this and I refused.She became angry.She open her mouth and it was like a black hole.She started saying a prayer to the Satan and she put her baby on the ground.She just disappeared and I was wondering how.I looked at the baby.It was dead.Dead baby covered with blue blanket.I wanted to say something but I couldn`t.My boyfrined`s face was white.We were afraid.He took my hand and we went away with our hearts beating fast.