Shadowsogirl
02-19-2010, 13:23
Може ли някой да редактира това съчинение? Има доста грешки и ако може някой да ми го редактира бих била много благодарна.
It was Saturday and the weather was cold and wet. I was hurrying to went home because there was a warming-party in my new neighbourhood.
I was waiting with impatience to meeting my neighbours. At seven o’clock I took a taxi to my house where Jane organized a party in my honour, but the weather was worse and there was a traffic jam.
When I arrived in my home there was nobody and I was really disappointed. I went to my friend’s house so as to take my key. When I opened the door a lot of people shouted “WELCOME HERE, SARAH!”. I was absolutely surprised!
I was meeting my neighbours and they were great with me. There was such a lovely
party!
Хич не бива, затова искам помощ. :)
It was Saturday and the weather was cold and wet. I was hurrying to went home because there was a warming-party in my new neighbourhood.
I was waiting with impatience to meeting my neighbours. At seven o’clock I took a taxi to my house where Jane organized a party in my honour, but the weather was worse and there was a traffic jam.
When I arrived in my home there was nobody and I was really disappointed. I went to my friend’s house so as to take my key. When I opened the door a lot of people shouted “WELCOME HERE, SARAH!”. I was absolutely surprised!
I was meeting my neighbours and they were great with me. There was such a lovely
party!
Хич не бива, затова искам помощ. :)