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Scr3amerka
02-21-2010, 19:16
Ако може някой,който се чуства по на ''ТИ'' с английския да ми каже дали открива някакви грешки в това есе на английски написано от мен.То дори не е есе .. просто .. MY BEST FRIEND :) МЕРСИ ПРЕДВАРИТЕЛНО.


My best friend is a person who I respect very much.I have known her since 15 years.She has got brown eyes,brown hair and very nice character.She understand me in every way and make me laught every time I am with her.She is the person who always can help me whatever I ask her or whatever I want from her.She live in Varna near my home.I can't imagine my life without her because the friends like her are very rare and make the life easier. :)

sticnes
02-21-2010, 22:34
Vsichko si my e nared samo deto "since" trqbva da go zamenish s "for" tova e gramatichna konstrykciq :) a inache e dobre ;]
P.S: Sujalqvam za latinicata obache ne mi se reska kompa che kirilicata se precaka ;D

Scr3amerka
02-22-2010, 08:12
Благодаря :)