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kris11
10-31-2011, 10:04
Здравейте,казвам се Крис и съм от София.Направих си есето за домашна по английски,но искам да проверите дали е вярно и най-вече ме интересува дали не съм объркал времето.

The years of school life are one of the most beautiful and don’t forgotten in the life of every person, I never will not let me to forgot them, to forgot all of my classmates, all moments of happiness and sadness, moments in which we were all together and we were laughing.
When finish school Iwill become a student.I want to become a lawyer,so I will study law in Sofia.This profession is interesting for me,because I will meet different people with different problems and I will help on everyone of them.........(само до тук ми трябва)
Благодаря Ви предварително!

sweetxstar
10-31-2011, 10:11
Ето това само трябва да поправиш-
1.The most beautiful ones,
2.and not forgettable,
3.I will never forget them,
4.when I finish school

kris11
10-31-2011, 10:53
Благодаря! :) :)