She is everything and more

[lucifer`s-devil]

She calls me at home late at night
As I long to hear her speak
The touch of lips and sound of her voice
It all makes me feel weak

I stare into her deep green eyes
And look into her handsome face
She makes me feel like I belong
In this dark and gloomy place

And when I am sad she takes my hand
And shows me that she is true
I tell her I love her forever more
Although she already knew

She buys me flowers everyday
And always leaves her heart
her key is packed inside my pocket
So we are never far apart

And when she leaves me I feel sad
With a powerful throbbing pain
For once she lets go of my hand
My day is not the same

At night she invades my mind
Keeping me from getting sleep
Controlling my dreams, she is everything
Making my body weak

For her I would climb far
Across a desert's scorching sand
And dive the deepest oceans
Just to hold her hand

Because I know that I love her
Without her my heart is tore
And if he leaves me for a second
I grow passionate even more

For she is the one who makes me smile
Whenever our lips have touched
Never in years would I have learned
That I loved someone this much

She travels inside my mind
Like only an endless kiss
If I was the last person on Earth
She would be my only wish

At time when the days seemed so long
And my roads in life were dim
There was only one reason I kept breathing
And that reason was her

For she is my sun, and my earth,
The spell cast upon my heart
From that lucky day that we met
I loved her from the start

Nobody can feel what I feel
It’s not even half of what I share
For there are no words to express
And no other love can compare

I can speak a thousand promises
Or even bet my living soul
For the love inflicted in my heart
Even I still can't control

I promise that she is the one
The person my heart insights
For before my life used to be dim
But then she turned on all the lights

Her gentle words froze me still
And she picked me up when I was down
From all the love she gave to me
She turned my world around
She is everything and more


vkaraite enda ocenka i na tva!

[Daqn4encetoo]

ako mojeh da si go preveda ... np oba4e ne sym na ti s angliiskiq makar 4e u4a 8 godini

[пипс]

страхотно е!твое ли е? на кого си го посветил ако не е тайна

[lucifer`s-devil]

na averkata mi

[GreenLadyM]

qko e!....dosta 4uvstva ima v tova!!!!!

[Mishka]

Ами добре е, но едно нещо не ми стана ясно...грешки ли има или на някои места говори жена...защото се среща и "he, his"...ама иначе е хубаво.

[lucifer`s-devil]

kut sum go prepisval ima gre6ki 6oto burzah mnogo i moje da sum misli z ane6to ddrugo i da sum pisla tui 6e go proverq ne usm go proverqval sorry

[Tedi_sheep]

She calls me at home late at night
As I long to hear her speak
The touch of lips and sound of her voice
It all makes me feel weak

I stare into her deep green eyes
And look into her handsome face
She makes me feel like I belong
In this dark and gloomy place

And when I am sad she takes my hand
And shows me that she is true
I tell her I love her forever more
Although she already knew

She buys me flowers everyday
And always leaves her heart
her key is packed inside my pocket
So we are never far apart

And when she leaves me I feel sad
With a powerful throbbing pain
For once she lets go of my hand
My day is not the same

At night she invades my mind
Keeping me from getting sleep
Controlling my dreams, she is everything
Making my body weak

For her I would climb far
Across a desert's scorching sand
And dive the deepest oceans
Just to hold her hand

Because I know that I love her
Without her my heart is tore
And if he leaves me for a second
I grow passionate even more

For she is the one who makes me smile
Whenever our lips have touched
Never in years would I have learned
That I loved someone this much

She travels inside my mind
Like only an endless kiss
If I was the last person on Earth
She would be my only wish

At time when the days seemed so long
And my roads in life were dim
There was only one reason I kept breathing
And that reason was her

For she is my sun, and my earth,
The spell cast upon my heart
From that lucky day that we met
I loved her from the start

Nobody can feel what I feel
It’s not even half of what I share
For there are no words to express
And no other love can compare

I can speak a thousand promises
Or even bet my living soul
For the love inflicted in my heart
Even I still can't control

I promise that she is the one
The person my heart insights
For before my life used to be dim
But then she turned on all the lights

Her gentle words froze me still
And she picked me up when I was down
From all the love she gave to me
She turned my world around
She is everything and more


vkaraite enda ocenka i na tva!

Ne znam perfektno angliiski, no sum nau4ila dostatu4no za da pronikna v tova strahotno stihotvorenie!Svetut se nujdae ot takiva muje kato teb! Zabelqzva6 vseki detail v neq i se radva6 na vsi4ko, koeto tq pravi!Ti si dostoen muj, a is talant na poet !Napi6i o6te stihotvoreniq ako obi4a6, za6toto za men e 4est da gi 4eta!

[DanGeR^F]

mn mi haresa Bravo! osobenno na angliiski e napisano i ima i rima bravo!

[naty]

brao brao