ese na angliiski

[Dorianchety]

moje li nqkoi da napishe edno ese ..?
Balgaria v minaloto i nastoqshteto!
BG e edna malka no darjava s veliko minalo.Sled tolkova bitki i sled 5-vekovno robstvo,tq prodaljava da se razviva.BG e bil mnogo golqma po plosht po vremeto na car Simeon "zlaten vek" stigashta do tri moreta.Tozi vek e bil zlaten sashto taka,che togava se sechat i parvite zlatni moneti.BG e bila upravlqvana ot mnogo tsare i hanove.Skoro tq shte bade prieta e evropeiskiq suiuz s cel za preofornqne na targoviq i priemane na BG kato edna dostoina chlenka na Evropa.
pls pomogne te :P

[Dorianchety]

molq vi za ytre e speshno

Bulgaria is a small country, located in Eastern Europe. It is famous with its great history. After so many battles and the slavery for 500 years, it continues its development. Bulgaria was a very big country (it was placed between the shores of three seas) when Tzar Simeon ruled the country. The age during his ruling is known by most people as "The Golden Age". This age is called as this, because that was the time when the first golden coins were made. Bulgaria was rulled by many Tzars and Khans. Soon it is going to be a part of the European Union. This is good, because Bulgaria will export many of its goods abroad and it will be a great opportunity to improve its economy.

Надявам се да ти хареса.
Успех!

[Dorianchety]

mersi mn {}{}{}

Открих си грешка
It is famous FOR its great history \/ \/ \/

[priti_kiti]

BG e edna malka no darjava s veliko minalo.Sled tolkova bitki i sled 5-vekovno robstvo,tq prodaljava da se razviva.BG e bil mnogo golqma po plosht po vremeto na car Simeon "zlaten vek" stigashta do tri moreta.Tozi vek e bil zlaten sashto taka,che togava se sechat i parvite zlatni moneti.BG e bila upravlqvana ot mnogo tsare i hanove.Skoro tq shte bade prieta e evropeiskiq suiuz s cel za preofornqne na targoviq i priemane na BG kato edna dostoina chlenka na Evropa.

Bulgaria is a small country but it has a great past. After so much fights and after five centuries under slavery , she still developes. Bulgaria has been very big area when king Simeon was on the throne (the golden century) and it has been on three seas. This century has been golden because of the first golden coin,which were stamped then. Bulgaria has been governed by many king and inns.Soon she'll be a part of the Europian union with purpose performing the trade and accepting BG like one of the deserving members of Europe.

[freestyler]

TVA NE GO 4EtI puk...koi sa e pove4e ot fen,a???

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