Английски

[Н]

эдр!Ще ви бъда много благодарна,ако ми дадете едно есенце (short story)с около 120-150 думи по английски. Няма тема,но пък е дадено първото иэречение и съответно ти трябва да го раэработиш нататък,а то е :
I was plannig to give my friend a surprise.

Е мс предварително Моля ви ако може по-бърэо ,э ащото ми е спешно.Отново мс

Не,не може! Напиши си го сама! Аман от тъпи мързели,дето чакат всичко само на готово! Няма да стане,ако не си седнеш на гЪЪЪза,ясно ли ти е!?

[Н]

Моля ви

[Seducti0n]

Emily,s Birthday Party
My best friend Emily have got birthday today.I,m and the other friends of the company were planning to surprised her.So we decided to made a big garden party.We prepared small sandwishes,made a lovely decoration from ballons and covered pleasant music.In the garden there was a big pool ,where we had the intention to swimming=A week ago we raised money to buy a present for Emily.Actually she really like Madonna and we decided to buy her the last CD of her favourite pop singer.
The party was very cheerful.We enjoyed ourselves together.That was a fantasti day with a lot of smiles,laugter,music and unforgettable experiences of course.

[find_m3]

браво само ,че sandwiches се пише с "С" а не sandwishes

[sWeEt_SeEd]

Emily,s Birthday Party
My best friend Emily has a birthday today.The other friends of the company including me planned to surprise her.So we decided to make a big garden party.We prepared small sandwishes and a lovely decoration with ballons and sorted pleasant music tracks .There was a big pool in the garden ,where we intended to swim.A week ago we raised money to buy a present for Emily.Actually, she really likes Madonna and we made a decision to buy the last CD of her favourite pop singer in order to surprise her.
The party was very cheerful.We enjoyed our spent time together.That was a fantastic day with a lot of smiles,laughter,music and unforgetable experience for all of us .

напрайх му някои корекции щото звучеше супер зле.Има още кфо да се поправи ама не съм в състояние и настроение.

[sWeEt_SeEd]

а и не cheerful party , по-добре amusing ,awesome , ful of fun, a great fun

[Presley]

Лелеееее ЦвЕтИтО колко грешки имааааа

[Seducti0n]

Дадох всичко от себе си.Извинявам се за множеството грешки ако някой е в състояние да напише нещо по добро да действа.