Earth Angel

[tony_8989]

You aren't perfect,but you try to be,
you are so good,so cute and kind.
Your angelic smile amazes me
and bewitches all my mind.

I've always dreamed of a real friend,
I've searched for it for so long.
I found you-God blessed me,
and i know-i am not wrong.

All the people around are attracted by you,
they need to hear just a word,
because they know that you are true,
and honest,and so straightforward.

I know-sometimes you are weak,
you have your faults too.
You aren't perfect,but you aspire to be,
you always know what to do!

[Sweet__Dream]

It's beatiful.. \/

[Saymon90]

Your angel smile amazes me

All the people around are attracted to you,

На пръв поглед намерих само тези грешки, но като цяло е адски дървено. Има някои изрази, които никога няма да чуеш в речта на някой англоговорящ (само защото е правилно граматически, не значи, че е ОКЕЙ да се каже).
По-добре си пиши на БГ за сега, а когато добавиш някоя друга дума към речника си на Английски, тогава прави подобни на този опити