Спе6но помо6т по англииски език!!!

[AutumnTears]

Здравейте!Трябжа да напи6а един текст по английски език но ми е нуйна проверка,за6тото 6те имам оценка вурху него Моля някой, който разбира от английски да го провери и да ме поправи ако имам гре6ка
Текста трябжа да е в минало време.Ето го и него:

This is a story about lucky man called Bill Haydon.Bill and his family lived in a small house.There was a mountain behind the house.Bill was a mechanic who repairs trucks.
One night something strange happened.Bill was in his house with his family.The children were sleeping ,but he couldn't .He heard the birds outside.
Auddenly all the birds stopped singing.Bill felt nervous.There is a terrible noise in the air.It was a earthquake.Bill ran and woke up his childrenand they ran out of the house.Betty screamed ,because she saw a huge rock coming down
the hil.The rock crashed in their house.

The next day bill couldn't find his bed.Later he saw it under the huge rock.

PLS OTGOVOR DO 2 4ASA/MERSI PREDVARITELNO!!

[stealthyGirl]

This is a story about lucky man called Bill Haydon.Bill and his family lived in a small house.There was a mountain behind the house.Bill was a mechanic who repairs trucks.
One night something strange happened.Bill was in his house with his family.The children were sleeping ,but he couldn't .He heard the birds outside.
Suddenly all the birds stopped singing.Bill felt nervous.There was a terrible noise outside (или не пиши нищо по-добре след noise).It was a earthquake.Bill ran and woke up his children and they ran out of the house.Betty screamed ,because she saw a huge rock coming down
the hill.The rock crashed in their house.

The next day Bill couldn't find his bed.Later he saw it under the huge rock.

[KiFy]

Ето тука си изпуснала едно - There was a terrible noise in the air. И според мен на "He heard the birds outside" ще е по-добре: "He was listening to the birds outsude" и после нали вече Suddenly..

[AutumnTears]

Мерси много за отговорите!Ве4ерта 6те ви кажа какжа оценка имам

[arsenalcho]

трябваше и да е an earthquake ама едва ли ще направи проблем за една грешка

[AutumnTears]

Имам о6те една 6естица!!!Мисиии много на вси4ки,които ми помогнахте