Благодаря много Аз понаправих тук там някой промени и придоби ето такъв вид:
A place of constant fire and smoke
Where fire continues to burn,
Where the worm does not die
that is the outer darkness.

Hell is a garbage dump
which you see in your nightmares
It makes people feel little and worthless.
Devil lives there to cause destruction and chaos
burning everyone from inside with his furious flames,
coming from the depths of the world.
You can feel his wickedness and cruelty
tearing you appart whishing you were never born.

Много добре ти се беше получило 5StaR но трябваше да го вкарам в рамките на стихотворението. Отново много благодаря