Can't release from you

[tony_8989]

I thought i would forget,
but now i miss you so much.
All i do is regret
that you are out of touch.

I can only guess
what do you think or feel.
I just can confess
that my sorrow is real.

I have tried so hard
to put off my affection.
But how to tell my heart
to take a new direction?

Why don't you let me know?
Why don't tell me what to do?
Just tell me yes or no
cause i can't release from you.

[Whyniser]

Не лошо.Може и по-добре

[Barbie]

Just tell me yes or no
cause i can't release from you.

Не ми се вижда граматически правилно. Трябва да е release myself from you.

[ScionOfStorm]

аха, рилийз в тоя случай задължително трябва да е с myself.

иначе - не е лошо, ама убер клиширано.

[tony_8989]

e, prav/a si, no nali znae6, 4e v poeziqta ne e zadyljitelno vsi4ko da e gramati4eski pravilno

[Whyniser]

e, prav/a si, no nali znae6, 4e v poeziqta ne e zadyljitelno vsi4ko da e gramati4eski pravilno

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