Ето го и второто (ще се радвам да ми напишеш изречението с болднат черен шрифт на български):

Dear Sir/Madam

I'm writing to you to complain about my visit to the 'Chipperhall Cirus Extravanganza'(името на цирка бля..) on yesterday 12 March.
First of all,the circus show didn't start at time.It was late more than an hour! The children were absolutely nervoused.
The next thing that I didn't like at all was that it was quite frightening.At the circus arena there was only one lion!
Second,our seets were very dirty and we didn't have a good (звучи ми по-добре) view of the scene (може да добавиш).
In the all chaos, it was impossible to get a drink in the interval.The people who were serving,were too slow and not enough!
If this were not enough the tickets were too expensive for show like this. (Смисъла на изречението?)
Unless you take steps to change something about this,I will have no choice but to call to your bussines director.

Your sincerely,

Mary Adams.