Nowadays most children spend their time in Internet cafes.
You can use internet cafes if you haven’t got a computer at home. There you can relax after work or school and check up for news. Generally the Internet has each kind of information and you can find everything you want. You can be in touch with person who is far from you. You can enjoy playing games, watching TV online or download files too. In the Internet cafes you can eat or drink something with friends and delight in the atmosphere.
However internet cafes has a few bad points. For example, some people are addicted to the internet and spend most of their time in the Internet cafes. The computer is harmful for your eyes if you spend too much time in front of it. It is better to being out and meeting friends than hanging for hours staring at the monitor of your computer.
To sum up internet cafes give us many opportunities, but it is much more better not to stay a lot in such virtual world.

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