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"Summer in on the beach

The season is summer. The weafher is hot and sunny.The people are on the beach.They are dressing in shirts, trousers and dresses. The children are playing football on the beach,are buying ice crime,are flying kite and are swimming in the sea.One family is eating underthe umbrellaand one woman is playing the quitar="