Вметнах няколко дреболии във варианта на Николай, който иначе беше свършил чудесна работа. На няколко места направих стилистични промени, но са почти незабележими. Гледах да съм близо до оригинала. Редакцията ми е единствено с цел да се упражня.

It was Saturday evening.The stars shone, the wind blew and touched soflty my hair. My boyfriend and I had been together since one year and that day was our anniversary.We had decided to go out and spend one night under the sky. I lived in a small house near a forest. It`s beautiful in the winter!
I had been preparing all day for that night. It was a special night. I cooked something. I remember that I prepared his favourite dish Musaka.He loved Musaka. Anyway, he came to take me out. It was amazing! The sky was clear and I could see all the stars, thousands of stars! We laid our blanket on the ground and sat down.He took my hand and said he loved me.I started crying of course.A few minutes later I heard something.It was like a baby crying.It was strange.We were in the forest and it was one o'clock.I asked my boyfriend if he had heard something but he said he hadn’t. An hour later I heard that cry again and I got scared.My boyfriend was kissing me when I saw a lady in white behind him. There was a baby in her hands.She had long black hair and her eyes were black too.I screamed. My boyfriend asked me what was going on and I just pointed my finger oat her. He saw her too. I hugged my boyfriend. My body was trembling. The woman in white whispered something. She asked me to take her baby. I didn't want to, so I refused. She became angry and opened her mouth. It was like a black hole. She was saying a prayer to Satan as she put her baby on the ground. Then she just disappeared and I wondered how. I looked at the baby. It was dead! A dead baby covered with a blue blanket. I wanted to say something but I couldn't. My boyfriend's face was pale. We were afraid. He took my hand and we went away with our hearts beating fast.