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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to about your advertisement in the international magazine for International Adventure Course.
I am 16 years old. My mother tongue is Bulgarian and I come from small town Samokov in Bulgarian. I have been learning English for six years in private school. My second language in school is Russian. At the moment I am studying for the FCE exam.
One of main reasons I am applying for this job is that I love to work with children. I have experience of looking after them. Last summer I was nanny of three children. I also have a little sister and I often take care of her. She is 10 years old. I would also say that I can organize sport events because I was interested of sport. This spring I would be in course of first aid qualification.
I am available for start this job between July 25 and August 30. I can be contacted on 0895723666 after 2 p.m. every day.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Ketty