Вярно ли е?

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ИМА ГРЕШКИ!

One of the most commented(DISCUSSED) topics in our time (TODAY) is [about the] uniforms. Do they have place (in) nowadays or not? Is it possible after all these (SO MANY) years to bring back the old traditioN?
Many people are against this(DISAGREE) ,maybe because OF the money.Many(SOME) parents think that this is unnecessary,just another way to lose(WASTE) their money.
From other side (ON THE OTHER HAND) some [of the] teenagers disagree [to] wearING clothes which doesn't fit with their personal style.Another point is that (HERE POPS THE QUESTION) will the uniforms be comfortable for all teens?I DON'T think SO.

Anyway,the uniforms are a sign of recognition FOR STUDENTS and SIGN OF prestige FOR THE PARTICULAR school.With a few initials and symbols on the pocket or sleeves each student is showing to other people that he is party of the relevant educational institution and he's proud of it.

Нещата в скобички, които не са в червено са за изтриване.
Agree/Disagree DOING smth
tech, което може би е TEACH, е уча някого, а не че аз уча нещо. Study е правилната дума.
I lose money когато ги изгубя по пътя, но I waste money когато ги пилея за ненужни неща.
Избягвай повторенията 'many', 'many' в последователни изречения.
Имаш много неточности, но последното изречение ти е перфектно. Продължавай да учиш!!