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My country

My country is Bulgaria. The population is 7,351,234 people. The capital city is Sofia.
My town is Pavlikeni. Its in the nort of Bulgaria. It has 11.839 people. Its a big town. Its a city.
My favourite place is swimming pool in park hotel Bora because. is very cool and water is mineral.
In my town there is a zoo= In the zoo live 120 animals and 23 bird species.