On My Own

[didivid]

Това е второто ми стихотворение на английски, ще се радвам да чуя какво мислите.

I need no one to stay by me
Cause I am on my own.
I need no one to question me
Or to where I have flown.
I need no one to comfort me -
Only I know what I feel.
I need no one to encourage me
Cause I am made of steel.
I need no one to tell me what to do,
Even if that someone happens to be you.

All I need is to move on,
To find my way toward the light.
All I need is to be gone,
To just vanish in the night.
Living life or being free?
In this never-ending war
No one else can fight but me.
'Cause I am on my own,
In this life I stand alone.

[DisappointedDreamer]

Прекалено предсказуемо е с тези рими. Гледай да ги избягваш. Не всички стихчета се римуват. Продължавай да пишеш.