Е хора плс проверете тази моя глупост по англ. спе6но !

[DoomShadow]

здравейте. тука съм в творческа криза но за утре имам writing и тряа да го пиша - няма как. плс проверете го и го корегирайте. и не ми се смейте много ;(


Your Ideal House

I want a big house in the countryside with many rooms, garden and a swimming pool.I also want to be overlooking a sea.
In my house I will live with my family but I also want to have a pet-I really like dogs and I have always dreamed to have one.In my own room I want to have just the most important things-furniture,computer, television set and a DVD.Excepting my own room there will be rooms for all my family, a dinning-room,a living-room, a gymnasium and a guest-room.The furniture for my family's rooms will be by their own choice but for the other rooms I will choose it.
The most important thing for me in the home is the atmosphere. In my house I want to have no scandals,lies and problems. I dream for the most united family in the world. This is the once I need.
So I dream for a wonderful new house in which to live with my united family forever.

[beiho]

За това кратко нещо ли се притесняваш?
ОК, ще те успокоя-справил си се много добре!!! АМА имаш много големи мечти бе,приятел!

[twsd]

Imash problem s suglasuvaneto na dumite no me murzi da go opravqm.za uchilishte shte mine

[DoomShadow]

ai stiga e pi4ove izkarax 3 na klasnoto i utre 6e go ucenqva. pls koregiraite

[SuSamka]

Забравил/а си банята Иначе май е добре...

[BaiboCo]

Your Ideal House

I want a big house in the countryside with many rooms, garden and a swimming pool.I also want it to be overlooking a sea.
In my house I will live with my family but I also want to have a pet-I really like dogs and I have always dreamed of having one.In my own room I want to have only the most important things-furniture,computer, television and a DVD recorder.Besides my own room, there will be one for every member of the family, a dinning-room,a living-room, a gym and a guest-room.The furniture for my family's rooms will be their own decision but for the other rooms I will choose it.
The most important thing for me in my home is the atmosphere. In my house I want to have no quarrels,lies or problems. I'm dreaming of the most united family in the world. This is what I really need.
To sum up,I'd like to have a wonderful new house in which to live with my family forever.

поправих ,според мен, основните грешки