Pyrvata mi tvorba!!!

[danlqn]

molq iskam da 4uq va6ite kritiki

Broken love

You said we'll be together forever.
You taught me how to believe and trust myself,
to listen to my heart, but I haven't got one anymore,
because you lied again, looking right in my eyes,
saying me that your words are not just stupid lies.
You broke my heart and made every single piece of it
to wnat you, to dream you, to hate you.
And I'm falling apart, I just can't breathe,
because your place is right here next to me
and I don't know who I am without you
or what I have to do without you.
Now I have nothing to do, nothing to lose, nothing to prove.
It hurts to look the empty bed, to remember the time when you were there
But I should go, I should forget about you.
I deserve better than this, than sullen future.
So I locked you deep in my heart,
where you're impossible to find, because it's to inaside.
You will be forever locked in my broken heart.

tova e kajete kak go namirate :P

[Fionna]

Добро е!
Трябваше ми малко време,за да си го преведа

[_SmiLe_FoR_yOu_]

It`s very good. Congratulations =D> You Got It

[Saymon90]

Защо пишеш на Английски, щом не го владееш толкова добре?
Имаш граматически грешки, а и звучи доста дървено и аматьорско.
Моят съвет е да си тренираш на български ... или поне не ги публикувай в Интернет

[zaraaa]

Na men mnogo mi xaresa